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Powerful Poetry of Rm 220

by Ashley Pappalardo

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STEP 4: REVISE
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It's everyone's favorite time: REVISION! Now that you have something to work with, it's time to roll up your sleeves and revise. Choose at least one of the following revision techniques.
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Complicate the chronology. Add three or more jumps in time.
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Make the poem twice as long. Then make it half as long. Your new half will probably not look like the old one.
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Cut and salvage. After every draft pause to notice what you might have lost from earlier drafts. Bring your favorite lines, stanzas, and ideas forward, combining them with what you love best about newer versions. 
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It's everyone's favorite time: REVISION! Now that you have something to work with, it's time to roll up your sleeves and revise. Choose at least one of the following revision techniques.
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Add new images and reframe existing ones. Seek new and unlikely angles.
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Make the poem twice as long. Then make it half as long. Your new half will probably not look like the old one.
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Cut and salvage. After every draft pause to notice what you might have lost from earlier drafts. Bring your favorite lines, stanzas, and ideas forward, combining them with what you love best about newer versions. 
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Change the point of view from first person to third, third to second, etc. Try a persona.

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