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Petelo Petero
My friends decided to have a sleep over at Caelys's house
After sunset at about 9pm I went to pick up Hamiora, Kupa, Cade and off we went to Caelys's. Next to Caelys house was an abandoned house so we went to explore. We thought that would be exciting.
The moon was like a bowl of egg whites filling the house with light like a big torch.
The house looked like it was falling to bits. There were unpainted boards falling off and cobwebs all over the broken windows. Lots of smelly rubbish was lying in the overgrown grass.
Caelys was in front leading and Cade was slowly walking at the back really frightened. We got into the house. Inside it was dark, musty, dusty and a mouldy smell came from upstairs. We could hear evil laughter. My heart was pounding like a caged animal. I was freaked out. We went upstairs to search each room.
In the 7th room I found a clown sitting on a seat with freaky massive blue eyes ugly as. The evil laughter started again, In the wall were more clowns. But they are normal clowns. I think the clown on the seat was the leader and then all of the normal clowns started to laugh.
After sunset at about 9pm I went to pick up Hamiora, Kupa, Cade and off we went to Caelys's. Next to Caelys house was an abandoned house so we went to explore. We thought that would be exciting.
The moon was like a bowl of egg whites filling the house with light like a big torch.
The house looked like it was falling to bits. There were unpainted boards falling off and cobwebs all over the broken windows. Lots of smelly rubbish was lying in the overgrown grass.
Caelys was in front leading and Cade was slowly walking at the back really frightened. We got into the house. Inside it was dark, musty, dusty and a mouldy smell came from upstairs. We could hear evil laughter. My heart was pounding like a caged animal. I was freaked out. We went upstairs to search each room.
In the 7th room I found a clown sitting on a seat with freaky massive blue eyes ugly as. The evil laughter started again, In the wall were more clowns. But they are normal clowns. I think the clown on the seat was the leader and then all of the normal clowns started to laugh.
‘’BAM’’! went the door shut and we ran out. At that time all of the clowns came to get us. The door to go out side was locked and we decided we had to split up.‘ I can hear an evil laugh ‘’ said Cade
I think Cade got caught first. I was sick to my stomach with fear, there were about ten clowns running to get me and all of a sudden Hamiora and Kupa got caught. Caelys ran into me and we got cornered. All of a sudden it went black.
We had been in the house for about 7 hours. We are all in a room with our hands chained together. The clowns surrounded us. Creeping into the room came the clown’s leader and the boys were never seen again ….
I think Cade got caught first. I was sick to my stomach with fear, there were about ten clowns running to get me and all of a sudden Hamiora and Kupa got caught. Caelys ran into me and we got cornered. All of a sudden it went black.
We had been in the house for about 7 hours. We are all in a room with our hands chained together. The clowns surrounded us. Creeping into the room came the clown’s leader and the boys were never seen again ….
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Hi
My name is Olo.
I am an 11 year old boy. I have 1 brother and 2 sisters and I’ve got 5 pets.
My name is Olo.
I am an 11 year old boy. I have 1 brother and 2 sisters and I’ve got 5 pets.
I am a year 7 and I am in Room 10 at Tokoroa Intermediate School
I was born in a car going to the hospital.
I like to play league and I like doing sports, I am good at all of the sports
my goal is to make it into the NRL
Do you know what the letters NRL stand for?
Do you know what the letters NRL stand for?
If you don’t it means National Rugby League.
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