Persuasive Writing

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I should get a new Sword because I've been good.

I should get a new sword because I've been good. 

How to get a new song cuz I've been good. 

Because I can bring it to school and play soccer. I can leave it at school. I will leave it at school so no one has to bring their soccer ball.

You can make over a million dollars playing soccer. With a new soccer ball I can practise and get good at it.

And if you play soccer you can become famous. When you are famous, more people will like you.

I think that my teacher should let me bring my dog to class. My dog is very well trained, for example: he doesn't bark, he'll sit when I tell him to, and he will not eat stuff that he's not supposed to eat. He will also have new friends like: my classmates and Oliver. He can even show Oliver some tricks, for example: he knows how to sit, shake, and lay down. That is why I think my teacher should let me bring my dog to class.

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I think that we should get a pajama day. You can bring a stuffed toy if you want to and you can bring it outside with you if its not too special. You can show your stuffy to friends who aren't in your class. Pajamas can keep you warm at recess and pajamas are just nice to wear because they are comfy. Maybe if we are good we can have a movie too. When I'm at home I have movie days when I'm in my pajamas. It would be fun to do that here at school too. I think that a pajama day would be a good idea.

I want more recess time.

I bet the class wants a longer recess.In the class I asked 15 people and they said "I want a longer recess" I think all of us would like school,because it would be more fun because we can play with our friends. And we can't play in math. It would be geat because we need it,because we have more math then recess.And not that fun:( 20 minutes is not long but 1 hour is good for me:) and that is why we need a longer recess.

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I want a blue lightsaber because I can just attack Darth Vader and it would be fun. I want to be in space . Only a lightsaber can srvevie in spiae. I would want the force. Only Jedi's can hold a lightsaber and the lightsaber has the force. Can I please have one?

A Collection of Persuasive Writing Pieces Written by: Grade 3/4 2023

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Oliver might need a friend because Dalas cant be in the same room all the time with Oliver. The students might bring dogs so Oliver can play with the other dogs . The students can work faster because they will have more company when they are working . It sould be fair that students bring pets to school because teachers are allowed to . It is also be fair because the teachers will have more company and so will the students . So can we please have pet day .  

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I think that we should have anothor art day. because I did not get to finesh my snow angel art. i want to show my family my art because I think that they will like it alot. it was very hard to do.

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I think we should bring a pet to school

i think we should bring a pet to school because  i think it would be  fun because  they are playful and you can play games with it like fetch.

I think we should  bring a pet to school because they can be very trained everyone can help with training so he\she  can behave better.

I think we should let our class pet it or hold it.

I think our class would be happy with a pet in our class!

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we need a fun day at school

Ms.hackett we need a day that we have gym and music because you ms.hackett will get a day off and the class will get a funish day.When the class is having funish day ms.hackett will be relax and eat "healthy food". The hole class can get a lot ya a lot of exercise and an activity. One more thing the class gets exercise witch will make your blod pumping.Then your body won't be tight. made by bhavya

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I want to be a goalie in ice hockey Because I am good at it, going on my knees and saying the puck with the catching glove. Because It's fun The other team can lose. At the end If you win, The players will Celebrate In the hockey room They Will be happy. I am really good with the stick and the pads at being goalie I'm good at saving goals .

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I want a million Squishamals

i wanna million squishmal . if i had a million squishmols i would make a pile and jump in it. and they are a really good stress toy there are good for sleeping on and there are good to put your had on. and i only have three you now i really like sqismols so can i have a million sqwismols.??

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I think you should bring me to wyatt houes Because Wyatt has a pet pig that I can play with . And I can play soccer. And wyatt it's my friend. And we can go to a restaurant. And maybe will masyam be ther. and your wyatt it's Mom's friend so why not.

I want to stay up later.

I feel like I need to stay up later.I won't have as much energy and I will not run in the morning. I will sleep in.I will not wake you up at night.I am not wrong the results will be good.I'll wake up at 6:30.Just say yes, please.

{I think we should go on a family trip}

If we combined all are money, we'd have enough money for it. Addie and I saved all of our Christmas money and Addie and I can help pay too!! We could spend more time outdoors. You guys always want us outside more often. Plus we could go on a hiking trip or go somewhere sunny and hot so we would want to be outside! We could also leave in the winter and that way we could stay there for the hole winter, and my birthday is in winter so we can just have a family birthday for me It would be super awesome!!!!!

Thats why we should go on a family trip!

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why we should go to disney land

I feel that every time we go out we only ever go to the store or to the beach but in my opinion i think we should go to Disney land because we would have so much fun! we could have a the most fun we had in are lives! rorie and I could have such a cool hotel room if you let us go to Disney land! we would be able to go on and see tons of cool rides. we can meet bunch of Disney character's and even see Nemo, Dory, and Hank! we could all practice as a family to pull the sword from the stone! even though we will probable fail a bunch of times we will still at least be trying! so can we please PLEASE go to Disney land?

You should trade your Pokemon cards with me. I love Pokémon some have really cool designs they are awesome I need new Pokemon I want new ones because all of them are mine are trash and I love having them because they are the best and if I got a good one I will fall in love with it and I mean it so I love Pokemon a lot hehe So they're the best and I really love them. Just like Quinn. Thats why I think you should trade me.

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