a collection of descriptive writing pieces

Descriptive Narrative Pieces

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Written by the grade 3/4 class at Mundy's Bay 2023

Peter then rolled the dice.then  I sew a giant python.then the python  chased  me. then more python came in  front of me. then the python chacs me in my room. then the python chraed me in my room. 

JUMANJI AND THE GIANT PYTHON,8-12 feet long/2-5m.

One day a litte boy named Maysam found a game called JUMANJI. He opened the box and found a game board.And he found two dice and he rolled a four,two and a two. And then a giant python came in the house,it was 8-12 feet long/2-5m long."AHH!!!" said Maysam "WHY IS THERE A PYTHON IN THE HOUSE?!!?"He was sared and he rolled the two dice and he got a eight{4 and 4} Nothing happened.he needs a six for the game to end,he was still sared because of the python.He rolled the two dice{he got a five,2 and 3}and then a 1-4 feet long python came in the house he was not that sared. And the python broke the bed,the door,and he's mom and dad's bed and door.He was he know that he's mom and dad would k#ll him. He

rolled,he got a one and said "JUMANJI" the game ended,all the broken things was not broken,he said "YESS!!".And was so happy that he was dancing.

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the lion chast them and go caught. The lion got stuck under the bed.  The lion got his head stuck under the bed and I rolled a seven and I shouted, "jumanji!" Some sleeping gas came into the room and I fell asleep. 

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One day my sister and my brother and I were watching (VERY) scary snake movies.

I said, "Want me to go and make popcorn?" Sarah and Ali said "Yeah" I into the kitchen to make popcorn in the microwave and I put the bag in the microwave ( 2 minutes later ) " POPCORN'S READY! " I said, when I walked into the living room my jaw dropped in shock when gaint python snakes that had red eyes and sharp teeth were coming out of the televition!!! Sarah and Ali ran upstairs. I grabbed a broom and opened the door and swep the snakes out the door the snakes were trying to climb up the broom but I shook it off the broom then I sweped them all out onto the road so the snakes would get hit by a car . "Ali Sarah you can come back downstairs " I said . Sarah and Ali walked back downstairs "yay" we all yelled "NO MORE SCARY SNAKE MOVIES LETS WATCH ANIME MOVIES INSTED." Aya said . We watched anime movies insted. THE END

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As I rolled the dice I got a four. I moved four spaces and it landed on Volcano Eruption! Charlee and I got scared then all of sudden the ground started shaking then the basement filled up with lava! The lava burnt threw the floor Charlee and I jumped on the chairs there was a bucket on the table, I yelled Charlee! quick take this bucket and fill it up with water! Charlee made her way to the sink and filled the bucket with water she passed the bucket to me and the water put out the fire we where so relieved! The room filled with smock and as the smock cleared everything was back to normal.

Peter then rolled the dice.and I saw a giant python. and the python chased me. Then more pythons came in front of me.and the python chased me in my room and It was so big that it was longer than my bedroom. I was screaming!

PART 2 OF THE WEIRD MAN LOOKING AT A MAP

When he hit the door knob it could not close and lock. We tried to scare him but he did not move at all. Bob tried to help  and milkshack our big dog tried  too. But he still did not move so we grabed his map and he finally moved .We ran away and we lost him in the the grass maze out side. Good thing he did not have his the map 

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i was palying in the atic with my friend ontel i Bumed in to the wall reevling a box that sad jumanji on it

i was palying in the atic with my friend ontel i Bumed in to the wall reevling a box .that sad jumanji on it .so me and my frieand opened the box i was shocked. when i opened the box it was a board game so of course we opened it. And started to play i ruled the dice. i rolled a six. Six monkeys spawned. in my kitchen im like whaat the heck is that sound. so i went down to the kitchen To find. 6 monkeys. in my fridge on my table.it was crazy.

Me and my trio  were planning on going for a walk

and then we all tried making it home before it was dark and then i remembered that we all never went through this path 

we were all so scared because its getting so late

and we decided to go inside as soon as we got in it was so bright

Lucy  heard  a sound and it was coming from the roof

we all were climbing to the top of the roof and there was this hole and there was the sound again 

we were all so confused of what the sound was until red and orange liquid came out of it and we all jumped off of the roof

all of our clothes were burning hot and Autumn saw a nearby lake so all of us wanted to jump inside of it so we can all cool down

until we all where trying to decide of where too sleep tonight Josslyn and lilly had supplies to keep us warm lilly had a sleeping bags for everyone to be prepared  Josslyn had a tent 

the next day we went searching  for a way home and we finally made it that was such an adventure 

THE WERID MAN LOOKING AT A MAP

One day me and my sister were watching the movie jumanji in our bed room with bob our new dog and our other dog was barking down stairs. So we went to the stairs quietley and a weird man opend the door. He was saying oh I am going there no not there oh not there oh there ummm but. So me and my sister walked farther and got down.  We let him out the window and he tried to open it and he broke the door part 2.

The Lion Atack. I went outside to see if my friend Jack could play. After he asked his mom we went to his back yard I saw a thin box shoved in to a corner I picked it up and I yelled at him to come over we went inside and I noticed a sticky note on the back it said jumanji fun for some not for all . I laughed I read the rest they said. Read instrucktion's carefuly I red the instrucktions and rolled a 3 looked at Jacks face It was pail as snow I terned arond and saw a lion on my couch I screamed so loud the window shook. I ran upstares and in to my bedroom and under my bed I thought to my self the instrucktion's said that when a game of Jumanji is started you must finesh it so that mean's that the lion will not go away unlesswe we finesh I got out of the bed and went downstares and told Jack to roll . He rolled and got a 6 monkey's steel food go back 1 space I looked at Jack and he looked at me oh no we both said we ran in to the kichen 7 monkey's were eating all my food I ran Jack following not to far behind. If I rolled a 11 I would win I rolled and looked at the dise a 6 and a 5 Jumanji I yelled. I hered my parint's car I packed up the game and put it Jacks back yard . that was a long day I said. I agrey said Jack we said our good bye's and went home. Then my parint's asked what I did when they where gone I said I played tag with Jack. Thee End.

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Jumanji Sponsored by Pokemon the Trading Card Game. Edited revised and Written by Amos.

In the morning Quinn and I playing a game of tag in the park when we found a game called Jumanji. But we didn't care about the rules that we found on the side of the box. Then we set it up and we started. As soon as I roll a 32 . Quinn and I heard a thunder sound."I think it's The Stampede!" we ran upstairs And we hid. But we forgot About Jumanji! we don't want to die getting the game, So we try calm and each other down, but it was no use we didn't know what to do in these three days, We just felt hopeless. Two days later we were scared to die of dehydration We even cried. .Half a day later we were screaming in pain as we were slowly dying. Three days later we died of dehydration The end.

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Amos and I' were going to The park. and we saw something under a tree it was called Jumanji. he picked it up and we went home and We opened it up And we saw a board. Amos rated the instructions It said you cannot finish the game until you get to the end and say Jumanji first Quinn roll the dice he got A lion go back twice. Add punctuation like this Amos said, ‘’Look behind you slowly. There is a lion behind you.’’ Quinn ran up to his room and the lion was stuck under his bed. .It was amos's turn he rolled a eight monkeys in the kitchen! It was Quinn's turn to roll he ruled at 8 A sleeping bug There was a bug near Queen the bug biting him Quinn passed out Amos was shaking him running from the rhinos wake up Quinn Wake Up Quinn amy Says and Quinn woke up and Amos was telling Queen to watch out come on the side . It was amy sister Amos Ward 16 Jumanji! Jumanji! and only Quinn and Amos knew about this Amos and Quinn didn't get in trouble but a friend of mom and dad come up and she has two sons and she said her two sons never read instructions and, Quinn and Amos saw the two sons holding the Jumanji game The and.

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Me and my friend found a bored game under a old tree. We took it home then we open the game.I rolled a 5 then we heard a noise coming from the kitchen . we went to the kitchen and there were Monkey's. I yelled so loud that the windows broke!! .Then one of the Monkey's look at me and my friend then all of the monkey's look at us. Then they threw knives at us. So we ran back to the game. Then I said to my friend if you roll a 12 then the game is over I said. Than she roll a 12 then it was Quiet. There were no more monkeys in the kitchen . We put the game back in the box and ran to the old bridge a threw the game in to the water. Then we ran back home then polled out a puzzle then her parings came and mine to than my friend went home the end. by isla

WALT: Invite Readers to Visualize We first read the book, "Jumanji" by Chris VanAllsburg. Many students had seen the movie but hadn't read the book. We discussed the writing strategy of "stretching the moment", and "show-not tell". Students chose one moment from the book and wrote more about it as if they were the character playing the game.

WILF: -capitals and punctuation -spelling-using word walls and phonics -complete sentences that make sense -descriptive sentences that show a character's feeling instead of simply stating it -the story told in a sequence, use of transition words to move through time

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My sister saw a bunch of monkeys eating all of my bananas! and I got SO MAD! my face was so red it looked like I was a metball.so I rolled the dice and                               some more monkeys apered and I siade noooooooooooooo!

Peter rolled the dice and he landed on the square that said python sneaks into camp. They were so shocked that they knocked the bored off the table. Then python raped around peter's neck he screamed so loudly neighbor's knocked on the door and they jumped out of there chair and they yelled go away! And then the snake got off Peter's neck and he was so relieved. He gave a heavy sigh. So they carried on with the game. THE END

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When Addie rolled the dice on a six, so she read the card in her head so my friend and I just stared at her. But out of nowhere Addie shieked my friend and I were scared. Addie said= "Walk very slowly to me". We walked slowly over to her and she pointed over behined were we were standing, there was a 12 foot long python in the corner of my living room! "Thank goodness my mom isn't home yet."I said "But I think theres somthing more importent here!" Addie said. Suddenly it started to chase us!

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april 15th 1998. One day as we slowly walking through the hallway "Mr.peter, and Ms.judey come here right now!" sadly we walk over to Mr.sent judey started to walk first, i slowly walked behind. judey whispers in my ear "your the one in trouble by the way. you were the one ran in the hallway second period i didnt" we walk over to Ms.sent "DETENTION!" yelled Ms.sent. 4hs later (the second bell rings) "you all may go home now" (at home) "ok kids me and your father are leaving to go to the opera after the opera we will be bringing guests over keep the house clean" says mother "ok" judey says as she tries to sneak the toy box out. "judey..." says mother "yes?..." judey reply's "i asked you to keep the house clean" "ok fine" judey puts back the toy box. the door slam's judey takes out her favorite toys and I take out mine. but all of a sudden we doth start to get board i slide i to my chair. "peter we should go to the park" "ok" i say slowly walking to the front door. we start to go and play on the swings but all of a sudden judey goes to a random box in a bush you could only kind of see it. "peter com here i found a board game for us!" i come runing over. the box reads "a game fun for some but not for all, PS read the instructions carefully..." we run back home to play it, but its like every other board game a folded board with a path to follow and a dice to roll. I immediately start to open the board, judey rolls the dice "8! 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8! lion attacks skip a turn and move back 3. aw darn" judey says "peter turn around very slowly". I flip around in my chair well I start to build up a scream and before i can scream the lion starts to chase us around the house in the bedroom, in the dinning room, and even through are parents bedroom we sprint in to the closet to hide. the only thing we can hear really loud growls from the bedroom but judey screams louder then a T Rex almost getting us found if i didn't cover her mouth. we both slowly tried to make it to the front door but there was a pile of monkeys blocking the front door so we couldnt leave and then as soon as judey tried to roll again and the lion tried to chase us agin but i rolled first and then everything was back to normall.

we saw a stampede of rhinos right for us. So we ran a wauy from them followed us to my mom,s home. when we got ther the rhinos broke through the door . I yelld RUN so we so we ran so fast thet we shouck the houl hose . we ran oll the up to my room.we hide behind my bed. the rhinoceros hrde Lilly because she was moveing alote I was l Oh no. What's happening I screamed so loud the windows shattered. I didn't know what was going on everybody knew I was so scared cuz I screamed and the windows shattered nothing went right that day.what did we do the rhino's got stuck under my bed.The end.

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