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Svpg10
Louie's redemption

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BY gary crandoll jr

Hello i'm gary I Want to tell you the story of a hero who wanted to undo his crimes.He wanted to fix it by going through triles,it seemed impossiple until A mirical happened. find out now.

 The hero named louie who is in trial for his misdeeds he wanted to make up for it all. AT first the trials was very easy from the beginning the first trial was the trial of hope. The trial was simple and not hard. He pass the test.

As time went by he passed most of the test almost completing the trials but he got to a critical point to the last remaining trials.The trial is the wills of sacrifices.The challenge was hard,louie had to loss something in return. He has a flashback of that moment that he made the ultimate choice. After the flashback, the door opened and he said’’ never again I won't accept that fate. I WON'T!!!!*bolts towards the light*”

He final makes to the final trail the path of acceptance. This trial needs a person to accept the things and take full responsibility.Louie said “ l won't tolerate it i can't!” Time when buy louie is very injured the power spider cloth destroyed some of the cloth is still on him.Blooded louie went on his knees he remembers the saying “don't give up because it's impossible, make it a miracle”.He gets back up and completes the trial and accepts the price. All tests are done now he leaves to face what consequences awaits him.