The Hospital with Evil Secrets

Venita Teao

It was late on a Friday night and Sariel and I were standing right in front of the fence that surrounded Ainsville Hospital, also known as The Hospital with evil Secrets!!
I glanced over at Sariel, but for some strange reason she looked happy as for me I was anxious.
“Here we go, ready to complete the 24 hour challenge!” she stated.
“Yup!” I replied, nervously.
“Got our gear?” she asked.
“Yup!” I answered.
“Good, we should be alright then. Cmon let’s climb over the fence!”
I took the bag of gear which included two gallons of water, lots of munchies, two torches with extra batteries and followed Sariel. When she was on the other side of the fence I chucked her the bag then made my way over as well. I couldn’t really see the hospital because big, bulky trees were covering the hospital like a gate protecting a mansion. When all of a sudden mad thoughts came into my mind. What if we die? What if we get kidnapped? What if we see black cats? What if we get possessed?
“Ummm, are you sure we should do this?” I mumbled.
“Don’t you wanna do this anymore, cmon man, we only just jumped the fence.” she said
“But what if we get caught by the police or something?” I asked in a frightened voice.
“If we get caught then we’ll run like Forrest Gump outta here!”
She had a point, there was no turning back.
As we walk down the cobble-stoned pathway,

long, dry grass brushed against my legs. The sounds of little insects singing were echoing around us. A cold breeze filled the air leaving my body covered with goosebumps.
When we got closer to the trees lightning flashed in front of us, BOOM it went!!
The trees disappeared. I looked at Sariel and she was shocked. I was shocked as well. Then I looked up and what I saw was horrifying. The abandoned hospital was like a sealed box, standing tall in town like an untouched stone. Windows were smashed and some were boarded. Graffiti decorated the brick walls. I felt like I was in a horror movie. We walked over a creepy bridge but instead of fresh water flowing underneath, there were watery, dirt patches looking like diarrhea.
“They say clients who stayed in the hospital would jump off this bridge to commit suicide because the doctors and nurses that worked there treated them badly. While others say the workers would dump the dead bodies in the flowing water to feed the deadly piranhas living in the water.” Sariel said, staring at the dirt patches
“What happened to the water?” I asked Sariel.
“No one knows,” she then looked at me, grinning, “cmon let's go inside!” she ran to the entrance of the hospital. I looked around, there were lifeless trees and overgrown grass.

long, dry grass brushed against my legs. The sounds of little insects singing were echoing around us. A cold breeze filled the air leaving my body covered with goosebumps.
When we got closer to the trees lightning flashed in front of us, BOOM it went!!
The trees disappeared. I looked at Sariel and she was shocked. I was shocked as well. Then I looked up and what I saw was horrifying. The abandoned hospital was like a sealed box, standing tall in town like an untouched stone. Windows were smashed and some were boarded. Graffiti decorated the brick walls. I felt like I was in a horror movie. We walked over a creepy bridge but instead of fresh water flowing underneath, there were watery, dirt patches looking like diarrhea.
“They say clients who stayed in the hospital would jump off this bridge to commit suicide because the doctors and nurses that worked there treated them badly. While others say the workers would dump the dead bodies in the flowing water to feed the deadly piranhas living in the water.” Sariel said, staring at the dirt patches
“What happened to the water?” I asked Sariel.
“No one knows,” she then looked at me, grinning, “cmon let's go inside!” she ran to the entrance of the hospital. I looked around, there were lifeless trees and overgrown grass.

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I then caught up to Sariel.

It was getting dark so Sariel and I got our torches out. We walked up to the doors that leads in the hospital, but it was boarded up.
“How are we gonna get inside?” I asked Sariel.
Suddenly out of nowhere BANG! Sariel kicked the boards down. Now I could see the inside of hospital.

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There were chairs all lined up and facing the counter. We kept on walking straight ahead, it was like an ordinary hospital but an eerie version. We turned a left corner, then walked up the metal stairs, which lead to the second floor. I opened the door and we both had to walk down a creepy hall until we came upon a room that the door read: THE DENTIST. The room was completely bone-chilling.

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“ARGHHHHHH!!” screamed Sariel in agony. I quickly turned around and Sariel was gone.
“Sariel,” I yelled, “Sariel, where are you?” I was freaking out, I started running, screaming for Sariel.
“Venitaaaaa!” screamed Sariel again. I turned around to the direction of the scream, all I see is this tall man, wearing a blue gown and an oxygen mask. He was pointing at me, even though I couldn’t see his mouth moving but I could hear him whispering in my ear saying over and over “Why are you here? Leave now! You can’t be here!!” I started to feel sleepy, then I fainted.

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It was disgusting. Mold filled the walls, paper covered the floor and broken lights hung from the ceiling.
“I’m not staying in there no way!” I complained
“Oh who cares about the mess, let's go and explore.” Sariel went inside and I followed. We kept on walking straight till we came to the waiting room.

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There were chairs all lined up and facing the counter. We kept on walking straight ahead, it was like an ordinary hospital but an eerie version. We turned a left corner, then walked up the metal stairs, which lead to the second floor. I opened the door and we both had to walk down a creepy hall until we came upon a room that the door read: THE DENTIST. The room was completely bone-chilling.

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“ARGHHHHHH!!” screamed Sariel in agony. I quickly turned around and Sariel was gone.
“Sariel,” I yelled, “Sariel, where are you?” I was freaking out, I started running, screaming for Sariel.
“Venitaaaaa!” screamed Sariel again. I turned around to the direction of the scream, all I see is this tall man, wearing a blue gown and an oxygen mask. He was pointing at me, even though I couldn’t see his mouth moving but I could hear him whispering in my ear saying over and over “Why are you here? Leave now! You can’t be here!!” I started to feel sleepy, then I fainted.

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I woke up, strapped to a moving table, doctors with masks were hovering over me, ceiling lights flashed against my eyes. They moved me into a room and then slammed the door behind them. On the left of me was Sariel, she had an oxygen mask strapped to her face with her eyes closed shut, making her look like she’s sleeping. The room wasn’t moldy, messy or dark, it was clean, polished and bright. I tried my hardest to free myself, but the straps were too tight. I screamed my heart out “HELP! HELP ME!!” Sariel wasn’t doing anything, until the door slammed open. Lots of doctors rushed in holding horrific weapons such as chainsaws, pocket knives and hammers, all the doctors shifted to Sariel. They were ripping her clothes off, cutting open her stomach and eating her guts and flesh. Blood squirted everywhere and an awful smell of rotten flesh spread around the room. You could see bones all over the floor and guts were all over the wall. When suddenly it all stopped. All the doctors froze then shifted their eyes to me. They picked their weapons up and moved towards me. “This is what we do to people who trespass. The piranhas are hungry ahaha!” laughed one of the doctors.

“Venita wake up,” Sariel was kneeling over me, “wake up!”
“What, where am I, your dead aren’t you?” I was speechless.
“You had a nightmare, cmon let’s get out of here.” Sariel helped me up and we both sprinted out of the hospital. I rushed down the stairs and ran my hardest out the door, not looking back. I ran over the bridge and through the trees and jumped the fence. I looked back, Where’s Sariel? I thought.

At that point, police cars arrived and surrounded me.
“Your Venita right?” asked the officer stepping out his car.
“Yeah!” I replied.
“Come with me, I’ll take you home.” he lead me into his car and drove me home.

Ever since that day, I’ve been having the same nightmare, like the one I had in the hospital every night. I still worry about Sariel, no one truly knows where she is. But one day I’m gonna find her and bring her back, I’m gonna do it before they knock down Ainsville Hospital.

“Venita wake up,” Sariel was kneeling over me, “wake up!”
“What, where am I, your dead aren’t you?” I was speechless.
“You had a nightmare, cmon let’s get out of here.” Sariel helped me up and we both sprinted out of the hospital. I rushed down the stairs and ran my hardest out the door, not looking back. I ran over the bridge and through the trees and jumped the fence. I looked back, Where’s Sariel? I thought.

At that point, police cars arrived and surrounded me.
“Your Venita right?” asked the officer stepping out his car.
“Yeah!” I replied.
“Come with me, I’ll take you home.” he lead me into his car and drove me home.

Ever since that day, I’ve been having the same nightmare, like the one I had in the hospital every night. I still worry about Sariel, no one truly knows where she is. But one day I’m gonna find her and bring her back, I’m gonna do it before they knock down Ainsville Hospital.