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The children in Maple Class have been producing some excellent descriptive writing about a storm using personification.  Enjoy!

Maple Class - Personification

As if the world had been drained of colour, the sky turned black. The tiny wooden boats tried to escape like a rabbit running from a wolf. As a result, they crashed on the hard rocks.

The sea was growing like a staving Lion.Lightning crashed against the sea and flooded the villige.The rain was like knifes cutting though the villige.

The aggresive storm Cat swalled the innocent boats whole.The rain grew heaviear and stronger until poor boats sank.

The aggresive storm Cat swalled the innocent boats whole.The rain grew heaviear and stronger until the poor boats sunk.

Lots of people were petrified,only a few werent.It was quite scary to be fair.

The cars cried as the rain crashed against them.Alot of people were terrified but a few weren,t.

The storm Cat was catching the boats like it was toys.The bitter,harsh rain ripped against the houses injuring many people.

As loud as a gun shot, the thunder was deafening it made the world go silent.The heavily rain hammard the hard rocky floor.

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