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The children in Maple Class have been producing some excellent descriptive writing about a storm using personification.  Enjoy!

Maple Class - Personification

Children were crying and clinging onto they're frightened parents who were running frantically to any nearby cellar.

The tornado was heading the city's way collecting everything that happened to be there or passing by.

Like a washing machine, it winded and twisted and turned, but it didn't let go.

The bitter, harsh gale smothered the hotel, then the sweet store, then the whole city.

The clouds cleared and the heavens stopped crying.

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The heavens had won! The tornado disappeared. 

A tornado was swirling round and round at top speed getting faster and faster, if something got in its way it swallowed it up whole and swirled it round.

It seemed the heavens were now angry crashing down sharp pointy tears.

Scanning the horizon, I saw the beast approaching.

The storm soon redeemed itself though crushing doorways, gates, fences and windows showing no mercy.

The heavens were now furious, tears ran down rapidly going through the tornado leaving a mark.

Suddenly, the heavens began to cry thick, blue tears which frightened the storm so he stopped in his tracks for a second, shocked at this sudden change of emotion.

The tornado was angry now too, gulping down more and more making a huge amount of damage.

A curtain of darkness was drawn across the sky,making the clean,clear sea rough and huge waves, turning the sea brown and angry.

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