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Goldilocks

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Rewritten by Ruby Lacey

One Beautiful sunny day Goldilocks was out skipping in the woods. She had finished cleaning her lovely big house and was dreaming about all the other places there were still to clean.

Suddenly she came to a small but very messing looking cottage. Goldilocks got really excited thinking of all the cleaning she could do.

When she stepped inside she couldn't believe her eyes. It was the messiest house she had ever seen. She loved cleaning but this was something else. There were honey paw marks on everything, dishes piled high in the sink and laundry on the floor. None of the beds had been made and the cobwebs looked like they had been there for years.

She took out her pompoms and got busy cleaning. By the time she was done the house was shining. Suddenly the front door flew open and in walked 3 very shocked looking bears.
'What has happened to our beautiful home?' cried Mammy Bear.
'Have we been robbed?' asked Baby Bear.
'Quick check the honey store!' shouted Daddy Bear.

'Hello' said Goldilocks. 'I am Goldilocks. Do you like your nice clean home?'
'Do we like it? We hate it. It was lovely and cosy just the way it was.' said Mammy Bear.
'Why would you do this to us' cried Daddy Bear.

Goldilocks began to cry. The bears felt bad. They realised that she had just been trying to help and when they took a good look around they could see the great job she had done. They decided to thank her with a special meal.

That night they ate a lovely stew together and became great friends. From then on Goldilocks visited them once a week and of course did all their cleaning!