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OceanBy Saadi
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Hello my name is Saadi and today I will be sharing my poem. My poem is called "Dear Ocean." I was inspired to write it by a poem called "Dear Sky" by Naomi Shihab Nye. She used descriptive language, and it was like she was literally writing a letter to the sky. Here is my poem.
Dear Ocean
By Saadi
Dear Ocean,
Thank you for being in my
Life
Ocean
Thank you for allowing us to swim in you
catch fish
go surfing
have fun
snorkel
much more
I love the warm tingle you give me when I see you
You are
Incredibly
Big.
I cannot see all of you
Blue
Aqua
I appreciate how you take care of the animals inside you
How do you do it all?
By Saadi
Dear Ocean,
Thank you for being in my
Life
Ocean
Thank you for allowing us to swim in you
catch fish
go surfing
have fun
snorkel
much more
I love the warm tingle you give me when I see you
You are
Incredibly
Big.
I cannot see all of you
Blue
Aqua
I appreciate how you take care of the animals inside you
How do you do it all?
Ocean
Ocean
Ocean
A pond 100 times bigger
Sometimes you're unsafe
Dreadful things happen
But.
When you're joyful it's paradise
Ocean
You are equal to
Heaven
From, Your Biggest Fan
Ocean
Ocean
A pond 100 times bigger
Sometimes you're unsafe
Dreadful things happen
But.
When you're joyful it's paradise
Ocean
You are equal to
Heaven
From, Your Biggest Fan
Here is my reflection about my poem.
The hard part about writing this poem was trying to find the right words. Sometimes the word would be too long and would not sound good. Or it would be too short and not sound good. But eventually I found the right words. One piece of advice is to not give up. I say that because if you cannot find the right words or the poem doesn’t sound good don’t give up. Eventually you will figure it out.
The hard part about writing this poem was trying to find the right words. Sometimes the word would be too long and would not sound good. Or it would be too short and not sound good. But eventually I found the right words. One piece of advice is to not give up. I say that because if you cannot find the right words or the poem doesn’t sound good don’t give up. Eventually you will figure it out.
END