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"HELLO!"By Jackson
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Introduction
Hello and my name is Jackson.
My poem is based on the poem Dear Sky by Naomi Shihab Nye. Her poem is about the sky and how grateful she is for it being there. Mine is about why you should write that poem. Also it's about how right now we are stuck in one spot kinda like a house.
Hello and my name is Jackson.
My poem is based on the poem Dear Sky by Naomi Shihab Nye. Her poem is about the sky and how grateful she is for it being there. Mine is about why you should write that poem. Also it's about how right now we are stuck in one spot kinda like a house.
“Hello!!!” By Jackson Strand
Don't you feel like you see the same wall every day?
You feel all you have is your own thoughts.
You feel you need to yell…
“HELLO!!!!”
You feel you are all by yourself
It feels like when you speak it’s like an echo in a cave
But the only thing that sticks around is you
“Wait, you feel like all that sticks around is you. But really…”
It could be a lot worse you could be in one spot all the time
your house
The earth!
Sit in the same spot all day
And depending on where you live your family
those people and things also feel alone
And think about your house it's always in the same spot
And if your house got up and walked away
You're in a trench of trouble
So maybe write a letter to the thing that sticks around for you
Because if it was not there…
Then you are really alone.
Don't you feel like you see the same wall every day?
You feel all you have is your own thoughts.
You feel you need to yell…
“HELLO!!!!”
You feel you are all by yourself
It feels like when you speak it’s like an echo in a cave
But the only thing that sticks around is you
“Wait, you feel like all that sticks around is you. But really…”
It could be a lot worse you could be in one spot all the time
your house
The earth!
Sit in the same spot all day
And depending on where you live your family
those people and things also feel alone
And think about your house it's always in the same spot
And if your house got up and walked away
You're in a trench of trouble
So maybe write a letter to the thing that sticks around for you
Because if it was not there…
Then you are really alone.
Thank you for listening!
If you ever want to write poetry, write what first comes to your mind, because when you have that first thought that can be your anchor to your whole poem.
If you ever want to write poetry, write what first comes to your mind, because when you have that first thought that can be your anchor to your whole poem.
BYE BYE