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Defender of The Interspatial WarLoading...
by Felix Antoine RousseauLoading...
Defender of The lnterspatial War
Ruben was born in 3005, the year of the interspatial war when the scientists of three planets discovered the existence of a new angry extraterrestrial who wanted to conquer the universe. Her mother, but him in particular, always thought that he was born at the same year of the war so he could protect his farmer planet named Bumblo. But there was one problem… he couldn’t talk. When the spaceships of the extraterrestrials came close to the planet, Ruben knew that the day of the fight was coming fast ,but on his little planet everyone hoped that the little guy who never speaks would decide to have another passion. It is not like they never try. Everyone in the community has tried in all the possible ways to make him change his mind!
The day the angry extraterrestrial attacked the farmer planet, Ruben was as ready as ever. He hugged his mother then boarded The Flying Rub, his spaceship with nice fire cannons. Arriving close to the enemy base, he started shouting all his munitions and he destroyed all the little green and pink extraterrestrials. The problem was the immense ship, he was big enough to literally eat the farmer planet. Ruben remembered the things his mother was always saying, « It is when you are in the night that the light is the brightest » He never knew what it means but at this very moment... he knew even less. The only thing he knew is that he was ready to die for his community even if he never had a real conversation with them. Destroying the enormous enemy ship; it was the way to protect the people who helped him grow up.
Even far away, we heard the explosion and then the silence that described Ruben so well. It was his way to say thanks.
The day the angry extraterrestrial attacked the farmer planet, Ruben was as ready as ever. He hugged his mother then boarded The Flying Rub, his spaceship with nice fire cannons. Arriving close to the enemy base, he started shouting all his munitions and he destroyed all the little green and pink extraterrestrials. The problem was the immense ship, he was big enough to literally eat the farmer planet. Ruben remembered the things his mother was always saying, « It is when you are in the night that the light is the brightest » He never knew what it means but at this very moment... he knew even less. The only thing he knew is that he was ready to die for his community even if he never had a real conversation with them. Destroying the enormous enemy ship; it was the way to protect the people who helped him grow up.
Even far away, we heard the explosion and then the silence that described Ruben so well. It was his way to say thanks.
Creative writing: my one -page story
For the drafting part I wrote my text and revise it with Grammarly and with the help of mr.crooks
For the last step with the help of mr.crooks i published my book online and send it to a contest.
For my prewriting I right in a formulary the idea of books to construct the squelette of my text.
In this project I learn to use the new platforms bookcreator and eduflow and they were nice to use and I learn a little more how to use the dot and comma.
I put my text in eduflow so my classmate help me with the errors of my text.