The Mysterious Neighbor
By Perea, Christian /Per. 6 with Mr. Abraham
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My story as about a villan moving in to a new neighborhood in a very high tech house. He causes majortrouble in the city but nobody knows who he is. The Super hero of the city lives right next to the villan
and notices something very odd. The Super Hero and the Villan say hi to each other and start talking and
that how the Super hero figures out who he is. at the and they fight and Villan gets locked up.
Villan: Guy that moves in the city and nobody knows him, also has super powers.
The Super Hero: Has super powers, everyone knows him but not by his real name.
Completed Story Text
There is this one very large city that has a very powerful superhero. The super hero of the city is well
known by everyone. People call him Astro because he comes from a different planet and is known for
battling very well known criminals that are too dangerous for an average person to fight. Astro knows
nearly everyone in the city and if he does not recognize someone he will go up to them and try to get to
know who they are. Astro tries to make a difference in the city like contributing his money or saving many
people's lives, even the villains. So one day on a different planet a very powerful villain known as
Mysterio goes missing and that is because he traveled to the planet that Astro is on without anybody
knowing. Mysterio also happened to go live and create trouble in the city that Astro is currently in.
Mysterio also happened to be neighbors with Astro. Mysterio knew who Astro was and knew that with his
new home had to have a high tech home and an underground layer, so he got to work but he could only
do things when Astro was out saving people's lives. So after a couple of months Mysterio was done and
could now go live in his house. Astro knew that Mysterio moved in but did not know who Mysterio. Since
Astro loved to get to know everyone in the city he went up to Mysterio and started talking to him.
known by everyone. People call him Astro because he comes from a different planet and is known for
battling very well known criminals that are too dangerous for an average person to fight. Astro knows
nearly everyone in the city and if he does not recognize someone he will go up to them and try to get to
know who they are. Astro tries to make a difference in the city like contributing his money or saving many
people's lives, even the villains. So one day on a different planet a very powerful villain known as
Mysterio goes missing and that is because he traveled to the planet that Astro is on without anybody
knowing. Mysterio also happened to go live and create trouble in the city that Astro is currently in.
Mysterio also happened to be neighbors with Astro. Mysterio knew who Astro was and knew that with his
new home had to have a high tech home and an underground layer, so he got to work but he could only
do things when Astro was out saving people's lives. So after a couple of months Mysterio was done and
could now go live in his house. Astro knew that Mysterio moved in but did not know who Mysterio. Since
Astro loved to get to know everyone in the city he went up to Mysterio and started talking to him.
Astro
and Mysterio are not much alike but Mysterio wanted to know everything about Astro so Mysterio ended
up lying to Astro about many things, so with Mysterio lying to look like a great person they became very
great friends. Astro always came to Mysterio's house to see how Mysterio was doing. Astro trusted
Mysterio and so Mysterio was in the good to start trouble without Astro suspecting anything. Astro has a
wife and nobody really knew about her since she always stayed inside taking care of the kids, but
Mysterio knew about the wife so he never wanted to do any trouble near the houses instead he wanted
to cause trouble near the heart of the city so that if he created some powerful weapon the city will be in
great trouble. Mysterio’s first mission was nothing major. All he was going to do is rob a bank for a little
money because he spent most of his money building a very futuristic house that has a lot of tech inside
of it. So what Mysterio did to rob a bank without getting caught is, since he is not known by anyone
besides Astro, so he went in the bank and tried to withdraw some money and when one of the bankers
did not recognise Mysterio the banker went up to him and Mysterio pickpocketed the banker and stole
the vault key and the key to the whole bank.
and Mysterio are not much alike but Mysterio wanted to know everything about Astro so Mysterio ended
up lying to Astro about many things, so with Mysterio lying to look like a great person they became very
great friends. Astro always came to Mysterio's house to see how Mysterio was doing. Astro trusted
Mysterio and so Mysterio was in the good to start trouble without Astro suspecting anything. Astro has a
wife and nobody really knew about her since she always stayed inside taking care of the kids, but
Mysterio knew about the wife so he never wanted to do any trouble near the houses instead he wanted
to cause trouble near the heart of the city so that if he created some powerful weapon the city will be in
great trouble. Mysterio’s first mission was nothing major. All he was going to do is rob a bank for a little
money because he spent most of his money building a very futuristic house that has a lot of tech inside
of it. So what Mysterio did to rob a bank without getting caught is, since he is not known by anyone
besides Astro, so he went in the bank and tried to withdraw some money and when one of the bankers
did not recognise Mysterio the banker went up to him and Mysterio pickpocketed the banker and stole
the vault key and the key to the whole bank.
So Mysterio left the bank without anyone knowing that he
stole the key. So later at night he made sure nobody was in the bank and he went in and turned off all of
the security and also deleted the memory of where he stole the keys all the way till he went back at
night. After deleting the camera footage he went straight to the vault and stole most of the money and
nobody knew until the morning. In the morning the bankers went in and saw all the money gone and they
had no clue who it was so they checked the camera footage and they saw nothing as well besides
footage was missing from the afternoon all the way to the night. The bank ended up doing nothing
because they had no leading evidence. With all the money that Mysterio took he made a very hightech
machine that can practically destroy the heart of the city. So Mysterio started to prepare for the mission
of destroying the heart of the city.
stole the key. So later at night he made sure nobody was in the bank and he went in and turned off all of
the security and also deleted the memory of where he stole the keys all the way till he went back at
night. After deleting the camera footage he went straight to the vault and stole most of the money and
nobody knew until the morning. In the morning the bankers went in and saw all the money gone and they
had no clue who it was so they checked the camera footage and they saw nothing as well besides
footage was missing from the afternoon all the way to the night. The bank ended up doing nothing
because they had no leading evidence. With all the money that Mysterio took he made a very hightech
machine that can practically destroy the heart of the city. So Mysterio started to prepare for the mission
of destroying the heart of the city.
So Mysterio started to prepare for the mission of destroying the heart of the city.
While prepping for the mission Astro came in his house and noticed some odd thing but Astro did not think any of it and after they talked any ate Astro went back to his
house and could not stop thinking about the unusual thing that he saw so the next day he went back but
Mysterio was gone and so Astro just waited for Mysterio to come back but then he heard a big boom at
the heart of the city and so Astro went right there but damage had already been done to the city, Astro
saw a different villain that had insane powers that could match with Astro’s. So here was the big fight,
Astro against Mysterio. Astro did not know what Mysterio was capable of so Astro had to keep his
distance and try not to cause more damage. Mysterio’s powers were very great and his powers were
flying, lasers out of eyes, super strength, and mind reading and with those powers he could potentially
take down Astro. Astro’s powers were flying, Super strength, mind reading, super speed, Invisibility,
shapeshifting, and fire manipulation. Astro had many abilities but Mysterio knew about all of them but
Astro knew nothing about Mysterio so Astro had to mind read Mysterio but Mysterio had that power as
well so Mysterio only thought about Astro’s powers. Astro was now worried because now Astro thinks
that Mysterio has his exact powers and could actually beat him. This is what Mysterio said when his
machine was fully built.“Yes finally it is complete I can now destroy all of this city and nobody can stop
me”. Astro had no idea that Mysterio was going to try to destroy the city and so he was not prepared, but
then he heard a loud boom and saw the main big building start to collapse and with Astro’s super speed
he was able to get there in an instant and also take everybody out of the building.
While prepping for the mission Astro came in his house and noticed some odd thing but Astro did not think any of it and after they talked any ate Astro went back to his
house and could not stop thinking about the unusual thing that he saw so the next day he went back but
Mysterio was gone and so Astro just waited for Mysterio to come back but then he heard a big boom at
the heart of the city and so Astro went right there but damage had already been done to the city, Astro
saw a different villain that had insane powers that could match with Astro’s. So here was the big fight,
Astro against Mysterio. Astro did not know what Mysterio was capable of so Astro had to keep his
distance and try not to cause more damage. Mysterio’s powers were very great and his powers were
flying, lasers out of eyes, super strength, and mind reading and with those powers he could potentially
take down Astro. Astro’s powers were flying, Super strength, mind reading, super speed, Invisibility,
shapeshifting, and fire manipulation. Astro had many abilities but Mysterio knew about all of them but
Astro knew nothing about Mysterio so Astro had to mind read Mysterio but Mysterio had that power as
well so Mysterio only thought about Astro’s powers. Astro was now worried because now Astro thinks
that Mysterio has his exact powers and could actually beat him. This is what Mysterio said when his
machine was fully built.“Yes finally it is complete I can now destroy all of this city and nobody can stop
me”. Astro had no idea that Mysterio was going to try to destroy the city and so he was not prepared, but
then he heard a loud boom and saw the main big building start to collapse and with Astro’s super speed
he was able to get there in an instant and also take everybody out of the building.
Astro and Mysterio finally see each other and Astro says “Who are you and why are you doing this?” Astro could tell that Mysterio was powerful and knew how to use his powers. Mysterio knew all of Astros powers and even
though it was more, Mysterio has defeated opponents like Astro in his other universe and the reason why he moved to theThe planet that Astro is on is because Mysterio has defeated all the superheroes on his planet. So mysterio was very experienced and Astro was not very experienced with villains like Mysterio. Mysterio
said “You are no match for me Astro, you don’t know what I am capable of now is you time to stop
fighting, I will give you a chance to fly away and this chance is right now so leave now before I end you”
Astro knew all of these people and he also had a family so if he just leaves these people he won’t be
able to make it up to them again so he said” not is the time I fight you because I can’t just leave these
people now and the come back thinking they will love me again, i will eventually have to fight you so why
not now. So they went on to begin fighting.
though it was more, Mysterio has defeated opponents like Astro in his other universe and the reason why he moved to theThe planet that Astro is on is because Mysterio has defeated all the superheroes on his planet. So mysterio was very experienced and Astro was not very experienced with villains like Mysterio. Mysterio
said “You are no match for me Astro, you don’t know what I am capable of now is you time to stop
fighting, I will give you a chance to fly away and this chance is right now so leave now before I end you”
Astro knew all of these people and he also had a family so if he just leaves these people he won’t be
able to make it up to them again so he said” not is the time I fight you because I can’t just leave these
people now and the come back thinking they will love me again, i will eventually have to fight you so why
not now. So they went on to begin fighting.