Why are cheetah's the fastest land animal?

by Malika

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Why are cheetah's the fastest land animal?
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Why Are Cheetahs the Fastest Land Animal?
(Cheetahs is a plural word.)
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Written, illustrated, and narrated by Malika, 4th grade.
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illustrations colored by Henry, pre-k
One day Alfa (a cheetah) was walking home from the jungle. 
“ Since I am anyways near Tie's (a tiger)house I could probably stop by to say hi,” Alfa said.
KNOCK KNOCK! As Alfa knocked on the door she thought if she should ask Tie if she had it in her to become an athlete.

“Hi Alfa! How are you?” Tie asked.

“I am fine. Alfa answered.

“I just have a quick question for you. Do you think you could help me become an athlete?” Alfa answered.

“Wait, what did you say?” Tie said.

“I said, I need your help to become an athlete and compete in races,” Alfa said a little bit louder.

“Hahaha. You are the funniest person I have ever met,” Tie said, rolling on the floor.
“I am fine," Alfa answered. “I just have a quick question for you."
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Then it was all quiet for a minute. Alfa's face turned red and she felt embarrassed for asking such a question to Tie.

It was only then that Tie realized that Alpha was seriously asking him for help and he said,
“Oh wait, your being serious?” 

To which Alpha replied sheepishly,“Yeah, I kinda am….” Alfa said.

“Oh,sorry! I didn't mean to make fun of you. Can you please forgive me and let's start from the beginning?” Tie asked.

“Yes, I do forgive you, you are one of my closest friends and you can be honest with me,” Alfa said.

“Ok, thank you. Well I guess I could help you to become an athlete or at least try to."

“ That sounds great!” How do we get started?” Alfa said.
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