How Saber-Tooth Tiger By Jaden Grade 4

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Once upon a prehistoric time, there were two light brown saber-tooth tigers, one named Drake and the other one named Mark.

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They were friends who always found a way to rap songs. One day the two saber-tooth tigers went deep into the dark green and black forest (which is darker than you think).

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One way to hide the background of the desk in the photo is to frame it out with white rectangles. Will a buddy be coloring your illustrations?

(Music)
Sooner than later, they met five monkeys. 
“Hey, hey and welcome to the banana funny show presented by me, Howard Duckling, by the way I’m not a duck fyi. So what’s your name?” Says a monkey in a large, yellowish brown, fat banana tree. 
“I’m Drake and this is Mark.” Says Drake.
“Okay, so, Mr. Duckling-”

“Howard Duckling, call me Howard okay?” Howard interrupted as creepy as possible. 
“Okay so, what’s this ‘banana funny show’ thing about?” questioned Mark as confused as a dog doing 8th grade work. 
“Jmmm wmmmm amm ymm wmmm fmmm omm, yum, oh, I'm sorry I was eating a banana so anyway just watch and you will find out,” commented Howard.

After the show…

“So, how was the Banana Funny Show!?” Sang Howard politely. 
“It was BORING,” commented Mark ruthlessly. 
“IT WAS SO SUPER STRANGE AND ANNOYING!” Yelled Drake 
“Well, that was very impolite,” calmly said Howard.

“ROOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAR!” Roared Drake, as a little monkey went on site and was telling Howard something. 
Drake jumps on the little monkey and scares her so much that she feel asleep.  

Scared her so much. Keep all the verbs in either past or present.

“Drake watch out, another monkey is using a sharp weird looking banana!” Mark yelled as frightened as me or you getting the second covid shot.
“Actually, he is using a high tech banana that shoots out banana cores,” he said.

Sooner than later, Drake and Mark left. After 14 miles of walking deeper and deeper into the forest they meet a velociraptor. 
“Hi my name is Venox the velociraptor, the last one on earth! How amazing is that!?” 
“Wow,” replied Mark with a groan. 
“ You better run…” commented Venox as creepy as a monster screaming on the top of it’s lungs just looking at a baby. Then, Venox let's out loud roar, it was so loud that Mark became deaf and left forever while Drake ran away. . .

“ You better run…” commented Venox as creepy as a monster screaming on the top of its lungs just looking at a baby.

Then, Venox lets out a loud roar. It was so loud that Mark became deaf and left forever while Drake ran away. .