How Guinea Pigs Got There Squeak.

SQUEAK!

"Their" - belonging to them

Illustrations?

By Isla Grade 4

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One morning Muffin the guinea pig was walking around the forest to find something for lunch. Once she walked a few seconds past a tree she saw bear and his wife. Muffin walked over to them hoping they would give her some food to eat.

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Bear - capitalize if that is his actual name.

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The bears watched as Muffin ran towards them. Muffin stopped once she got to the bears. She smiled up at the bears so the bears smiled back at her. 

“Good afternoon Muffin.” Bear's wife said.
 “Good afternoon,” Muffin said back. 
“Do you guys have any food that I could eat for lunch?”
“Im sorry muffin.” Bears wife said.
“We don't have any food for you. But we are just about to go look for some. If you'd like to you may join us.”

Check for missing punctuation.
EX: Good afternoon, Muffin," Bear's wife said.

"I'm sorry, Muffin," Bear's wife said.

“No thank you” Muffin said.
So Muffin smiled at them then walked back home. The bears thought she was going to get some food somewhere else so they followed her.

Muffin walked back to her cabin. She shut the door behind her then locked it. She walked over to her cage to take a nap so she could get her mind off her hunger.

 The bears outside still wanted to know if Muffin was getting food or not so they tried to open the door. But since Muffin locked it, the bears couldn't get in. And they didn't want to knock on the door so they had a different idea. BOOM! The door busted open!

Muffin jumped up and yelled, “GET OUT OF MY HOUSE NOW!”

Why didn't they want to knock on the door? They seemed like polite bears.

Then Bear got angry. So he walked over to Muffin's cage and with an angry face he lowered his paw into Muffin's cage.

“Well I don’t care what you think! I only care about myself!” Bear said. So he leaned down and SCRATCHED MUFFIN!

        “SQUEEEEEK!” Muffin yelled!