How snakes lost their arms and legs

Before

After

By Quintin Grade 4

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Timothy was a curious snake and was very nice when he asked his questions. But one day Timothy the snake walked over the forest and he thought. What is in the mouse's hole.

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So he went over to Miles the Axolotl pond and asked as politely as he could
‘‘What is in mouse's hole ?’’And Miles the Axolotl said
‘‘You shouldn't ask that.’’ But Timothy really wanted to know so he went over to Mitch the frogs pond.

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And asked as politely as he could
‘‘What is in mouse's hole’’And Mitch the frog said
‘‘You shouldn't ask that’’. But Timothy really wanted to know so Timothy went over to Gary the turtle's pond.

And asked as politely as he could, ‘‘what is in mouse's hole?’’
Gary said ‘‘you shouldn't ask that.’’
But Timothy really badly wanted to know so he went over to Sam the fish pond to find out.

And Timothy swam down to find him and asked as politely as he could, ‘‘Bububububububu.’’
And Sam said ‘‘Bububububububu’’.
They both didn't know what each other were saying so they both went to the surface.
Timothy said ‘‘ What is in Mouses’ hole?”
Sam the fish said, ‘‘You shouldn't ask that.’’
But Timothy really wanted to know so he went to Henry the noble mole to find out the answer.

So Timothy asked as politely as he could,‘‘What is in the mousehole?”
Mole said, ‘‘Why don't you go find that answer.”
Timothy went off to the mouses' hole.

And when he went in Henry the mouse said, ‘‘Get out of here quick.”
SHAZZAM but it was too late. Snake had lost his arms and legs.
‘‘I told you not to go into my hole mouse said. Snake didn't listen to the mouse when he whispered don't go in my hole no matter what.
And now he knows to mind his own business.

THE END

‘‘I told you not to go into my hole," mouse said. Snake didn't listen to the mouse when he whispered, "Don't go in my hole no matter what."

(Check your punctuation when someone is speaking.)