Treasure Island

"Jim!" exclaimed the humongous captain "clean the deck." Jim side "I new it." The captain exclaimed "well that's your chore so... of you pop my friend!" "I i!" whispered Jim. The captain said " thanks Jim there's a great one." The next destination is our tool shop for fantastic tools so we can dig this treasure." Captain I am sea sick," whispered Jim. The captain side "okay matey only 13 days to go!" in a mouses squeak of a voice and I arrived at the shop. "Please may we have a gold digger?" The shop keeper who was jumping in joy exclaimed "yes you may yes that will be 8 golden metal half prise okay that's all see you okay any time thanks yeah any time I got you Jim "okay ad okay any time see you" (admin) bye. Orr did you see that all them spears,spades there absolutely brilliant you can't ask for anything better then all them."

"One more day to go" exclaimed the captain "boss when is food done!" "emmm in fifteen minutes perhaps" exclaimed the captain "ahhhhhh i can't wait chef "ready its served" "yum delicious fish caught from the sea and cooked seventeen minutes later "i feel fresh i feel like iv'e been in the sea ha" exclaimed Jim

What's Treasure island you ask?! ''Why are we here it's so dark,'' Questioned Jim Quietly I was excited for the Treasure ''This is going to be where me castle is going to be built!,'' -because i'm going to be rich!- I Replied to Myself.

I and the crew got lost at Treasure island Jungle.I saved a baby Elephant from a swamp,The baby Elephant's leg got stuck on the vines,The Elephant ran away Immediately and joyfully to his family. The captain has gotten shot by a sleeping dart.He fell asleep &amp; one of the mysterious people tied him on a rope -on his arms and legs- and underneath him they started a ''F-fire!!'' i Yelled.I hid -behind the bushes-.I couldn't fight just yet..because they had clubs.I couldn't ask for any more..

"Jim get off the boat, you can't stay up there for ever," the captain shouted up at me. "Yes captain," I replied. I jumped off the boat and walked to shore with a sigh of relief. Just then, I looked around for a moment and had second thoughts about coming here. It was dark almost everywhere. There was a forest of pine trees, rivers of golden sand in between the trees and just out side the forest were rotting logs and leaves that had been there for years.

sand and drew pictures of my family. "Get up and make yourself useful," the captain shouted at me. "Why don't you set up the camp," he said whacking the tree with his rusty old sword. "Yes captain" I replied nervously.

"Look captain, look at that rock it looks like a spy glass!" I shouted eagerly at the captain. "Be quiet I don't care about rocks!" snapped the Captain with a terrifying growl. I sat on the boiling

The Long Lost Island

After breakfast, we had to set off home. So then we quickly packed and I packed as slow as possible to not leave anything behind on this debris, deserted island. Most of my stuff were camouflaged so that means they were hard to find. Finally when I found all of my stuff, I gathered them all up and packed them in my suitcase. I was exhausted from kneeling down and my back was acing from being down all the time."Right, lets go." said the captain angrily for some reason. "Got the treasure?" I asked. The captain said yep so everyone was cheerful until we all saw this. It was horrifying. The ship was stolen! It was time to get revenge on someone.

The secret Island

"All aboard the ship! " The captain said aloud. We chased the ship for days and days. Until finally (which was months) we were right behind them , picking fruit , they were wearing disguises. I didn't recognise them but then I saw a beard fell of and we caught them. Finally after all these years. we celebrated by having a picnic with the intricate golden cups and delicate plates. Me and the crew were eating while looking at the resplendent,golden sunset. Then the sunset turned into an enchanting night sky.

At sunrise, most of the crew observed that Jim was gone,"Jim,Jim where are you!" shouted one crew member.Everything went silent.They all decided to think of a plan.In the creation of the trap, there was something on the floor.When the creature or person steps on the trap, they will be lifted into the air by a rope."Hand it over kid!"spoke the other captain who took Jim."Never!" Jim said loudly.Salazar was becoming furious!The crew crept in.They started taunting the evil crew.Angrily, the evil crew charged after them.They ran right into the trap then...BOOM!They were caught!"You haven't seem the last of me!" yelled Salazar.Soon after the successful trap, they untied Jim out of the ropes.

Later on, they found the treasure!"Eureaka!" screamed Jim.Each pirate got 15% of the treasure.Our adventurous journey was not over yet.

Eventually, we brought the massive treasure box on the Hispaniola -our boat- and sailed back home . We put the treasure int our cupboard. We saw Terror Island fade away into the horizon. A few days later , we spotted our home island appearing in the distance . We arrived to find our families cheering as loud as thunder. i went to get the treasure, but it was gone, and in its place was a letter saying " Not all of us fell in the hole " ...

Jake [Captain blue beard's son] gets stuck in the Mexican Island all by him self. He meets 5 boys in his age and made a group called TJ group. The TJ group gets more people to come so that they could help Jake go back home. Read the story called Jake all alone so you could know what happens after

Obviously, someone would have tracked where we were.Our footsteps could lead us carefully to our location."All we are thinking of is the boat."I said.The boat is right there as we frantically got on the boat we set sail and suddenly we opened the chest and in shook"Wow!"I said it was empty with just spacious room.

This is a limited edition book and remember always follow your dreams and see you next time!

As they were about to get on there ship we hered them say in a whisper we have are treasure anyways.we were about to steel it. But then I said ''NO'' in a loud voice ''we have our treasure they have there's that's fair'' ''now lets chill on the beach'' after 2 HOUR'S we got on the ship and sailed home. We shared the treasure with everyone mostly my family and of course my crew THE END

"Ahoy"! shouted the captain while glaring over the boat.Finally ,the long trip is over and we were ready to get of this boat and explore the wonders this island has to offer . We all ran down the stairs stumbling and tripping just to lay are feet on the soft ground.I thought to my self for a couple of seconds if I have left any thing on the old crooked boat ,"AH HA",I shouted but remembering that the captain gets a bit angry.I wanted to tell him but I was thinking of how he would shout at me but then I gained up my nerve to tell him. Slowly I crept towards him he was towering over me blocking out the sun . I said to him ,"um s-sir "while scared for life he shouted ,"WHAT!?". I said ",I-I left t-the map on the b-b-boat". He was furious and he shouted magnificently loud ,"WHAT YOU LEFT IT ON THE BOAT"?! It took him a couple of seconds to realise that we have all ready made it to this magnificent island that legends have talked about but never came back. One of the crew members have been on far adventures but nothing like this.

It was the start of are gurney we have yet to explore . We followed behind the captain, this was going to be chaotic but no turning back now we could here the captain murmuring to himself saying stuff like ,"if we don't find this treasure its Jim's head for leaving the map on boat". We  just kept on on following him even though he said all that threatening nonsense. Creeping through the deep dark forest was rustles and dead animals and fresh meat . It was like something or someone was here ready and prepared ...

Treasure island hunt who will find the majestic treasure ? ...

The smoke from the fire was swirling up the side of the mountain. Half way up, the smoke was blowing inside a cave. "Look up there, there must be something inside that cave!" I shouted. After a long climb we were inside the cave, I stepped on a white dusty block. Suddenly, I froze... A rope started lowering down slowly with a huge rock tied on it. "Aaaaaaaaaaah, we are going to die!" I said in fear. I felt a sensation of something slowly sliding on my leg I looked down on my leg. Then... "Get the snake off me right now!" I said shivering. Captain Blue Beard got a flaming arrow from the booby traps and threw it at the snake on my leg, it died. "Thank you Captain, thank you!" I said in relief. The animals kept chasing us, The arrows and booby traps firing.

"Listen to me everybody, I shouted for attention. "We are going to fire at the animals to get past and get the treasure!" I Shouted in bravely. Immediately we got the arrows and I exclaimed, "Fire now!" We started firing at the animals. "Aim lower!" I shouted Suddenly we could hear their screams as we aimed at their flesh, blood poring all over the cave. As we went closer and closer we could see their sharp bloody teeth their red eyes that may turn us into stone. When the animals all died me and the crew ran and got the treasure we survived going through the animals blood and went to the ship.

After a long and difficult climb, my best friend nearly fell because he had really sweaty hands and slipped from the ropes we were using to climb. We had stepped on to the summit of the Spy Glass and there was a note on a little stamp which looked like a tiny pedestal. The note said 'You will go into the Maze of Dread and may or may not find the treasure in here. You have got a flare and only one. If you use it at a stupid time you will not get another chance, so use it carefully.'' Over an hour later my crew and I found another note and saw we had done all that for nothing because it was on the very top of the Spy Glass pedestal.

If none of you ever knew, I have a fear of heights. My captain tried to help me face my fear but I didn't dare try. My captain got a rope and dropped it down so I could climb it to get up the Spy Glass for the treasure I nearly fell because of how excited I was. My friends shouted ''Jim, we need a key to open the treasure.''

A few minutes later, my friend found the key. We were looking at the treasure chest in fear. Nobody dared to open it. I stepped in front and said "I will do it if you can not do it.'' When I opened the treasure chest there was an cacophonous explosion - which meant that pirates were coming for us.

"OH NO"The captain screamed ! The map is stolen. "No it can't be !!!" I screamed So because of this we were all stuck in one place with no way to go there was a lot of bushes and logs and leaves then all of a sudden a tribe came in and said "You have to defeat us before you can get the map back." "Fight!!!!!!!"Everyone screamed. Then we all went in for the attack !!!!! Surely we were going to win but you will never know,lots of people might die or get defeated. Tribes pulled out fists..... We pulled out fists..... They got bullet ants out (have not got a clue where they got them from).... We got anacondas out (from people that have them back at home).... Constantly,we kept hearing punches and groans,there were so many it was unreal.It was really unfair that the tribe had like 20 people and we only had like 10.Then we heard a massive groan. OH NO it was the captain and thankfully he did not faint, we were so relieved. Then all of a sudden we heard a horn noise(which meant the fight was over).

Thankfully the tribe said "You have won the fight you can collect your treasure,we are so sorry we put you through this out boss told us to do this." It's ok but IM STILL VERY AGHAST AT YOU ! NOW give us the treasure s owe can get off this island," we shouted.Then they gave us the treasure and we set off back home safe and happily.The sea was like a family swimming together because they are a family.We have been travelling for sooooo ling it was unreal.

We all had a fun time and we were so excited that we got the treasure. Now from this extract do you still want to go to Treasure Island, lots of snakes..... Tribes...... Bullet ants.... Tse Tse flys...... But you will never know how Treasure Island is until you experience the island yourself ..........

I replied ," Why you are hear ?" Crew said ," We are looking for map" I replied ,"Why you need the map ? " Crew said, "Bescause "captin need the treasure" So I was tolled a lot of question . But I loved pirates and captin. Is this a dream or not ? " C-can I speak to the captin ?" I replied "Plssssss bescause want to join you " said me . " Go to the ship then go to left there the door must say boss" replied crew . Then I went to the ship then go to left then l see the boss so I knock . Then I go in the door then we talk about that I can join in and he said, " Yes" Then I said, " Hear you go the map " Crew replied ,Come on the ship it going a away" "O-okay I am going to the ship " said me . Then went to sea it was blue , shine, bright and it was so beatuiful sea. But their was some pirates but they was bad pirates they have a map to so it this fake but I find it . I replied , Grrrr I am so anger " Crew said , I have a plan"

so one crew had I plan so you will attack the bad pirates I get the map swap the maps and we going to have the treasure .Then we was going to go there ship but crew go to swim under water I will go with you . Then we went to the under the water but there was monky but the crew sing twinkle star song to make them sleep . Then I just go to swimming then I got to the ship . There the map so I got it then I go to the crew go to yours ship I will come . Then I go to ship then we got the map.

An arrow went flying through a tree it looked like a tribe's arrow and wouldn't you know a tribe member flew out behind his arrow . Some out of bushes and some out of trees this looked like the end of this gurney . Just as I say that in my small and dull head the captain shouts out the last thing I would do ,"FIGHT LADS",he said with his sword shining like a diamond . We ran and hit the tree with our swords to hit their camp it worked but we had to deal with the tribe members . A tarantula and then they all ran away for some reason, well note to self grab a tarantula to scare away tribe members . "YES",shouted the captain he did not notice that the treasure was glowing bright behind him . "ok boys",he announced ,"get the chest". Once we picked it up it felt like a person was inside that must mean that there is a lot of treasure in it ,"WERE RICH",I shouted. Walking through the sand was the hardest part of the walk because are feet got stuck in the soft sand . But we got it .

Once we laid the the chest on the ground that felt like it has two horses inside with saddles on it carrying a fat person . The captains eyes were glowing with happiness . I could not wait for what was inside just one hint it was NOT good . It was a very dramatic opening the chest from the island of treasure . "Run", I shouted , a tribe member was inside no wonder it was heavy it looked like he wade over 500 bounds . He had a bow and arrow we ran but the captain didn't have enough time to run ,"oh no not again",the captain said with a grumble . and he got shot in the eye right at the edge of the ship you know what happens then...

I tried to follow Harriet, but I lost her amongst the thick jungle. I climbed up a tree and tried to see her but all I could see were the tree's canopy . Just then, I saw her a the top of a tall, rocky mountain. The next minute she was gone, they had pushed her, toppling off the very top of the towering mountain. The lady really did mean dead meat. Yes, my amazing sister was dead, dead meat.

I walked back to the camp. I wondered what the captain would say. Would he be angry? I just didn't know. When I finally got back to the camp I was horrified. Bodies lay everywhere, the white sand was red with blood. I feel to my knees and cried out. Through my tears I could see the shapes of the old witch and her men approaching with their swords raised above me...

"Anna get of the ship now!"He shouted. When I stepped off the Hispaniola,which was the ship,I looked around and wandered across the shore.The wind blew a zephyr and a leaf fell on my cheek and softly fell on the sandy beach.

After a while,I saw something moving. "It is probably just an animal."I thought. In the distance I saw a weird shape coming towards the island. My heart was pounding like a horse racing. In the horizon, the shape was coming closer and closer. I was still wondering what is was...

It was another ship! My heart was beating like a cannon. "All aboard the ship!" The captain bawled. " That treasure is ours!" The other crew bellowed. "Perhaps they want to share it." Said one of the ship members innocently. "Of course not!" The captain yelled.

The crew member just quickly looked down and started scrubbing the filthy decks (which were mouldy)and the captain started thinking about a plan while sitting on the silky cotton armchair. The scent of the decks absorbed into the armchair and he started smelling like the decks.

Have you ever found a map?Wonder where it leads to?Find out.After a few months on the dreaded boat,we had finally reached Treasure Island.As I held the scruffy old map in my hands, I walked speechless.I glared at an enormous pine tree and towering above was the gigantic spy glass.My heart was racing like a cannon ball firing out a ship.The captain said,"Hand over the map Jim!"and so I did.

To have a better chance of finding the guarded treasure, we each split up.As I brushed past the knife like thorns, I entered a clear space with all the trees chopped down.....

I would have been sure from how big this island is it would have not been visible from above.The I saw a bent golden key. Straightaway,I was filled with excitement but then I realised if it was on the floor then someone else is on this island.... 

As I took my next step, an arrow shot out like firing like a cannon! I quickly dodged it.It was about the skin of my teeth away from my head.Risking it, I stepped my next step.Nothing happened.I was starting to think this was a puzzle.Soon I knew the pattern so I solved the puzzle.It was tense.One wrong step and I would be risking my life here.But the problem was that there was a door.The rusty key was bent.So I took my hammer out and bent it back to place.As I opened the door, SNAKES whipped out ferociously......

After a while,we had about 2 miles till we got home . I was really excited to get home . We have travelled for so long, it's unreal . I see the city ." Yay i'm home ! "I Shouted ." You have certainly got a lot of treasure Jim , "yelled my mum . "I have , now lets go share the treasure with everyone else , " replied Jim .

"Look,look over there Harriet," I said to my sister. "There's a cave," "Lets see whats inside" Harriet said to me curiously.

"There's a dead lady in here, LOOK!" Harriet shouted to me as she stared in shock. "That's not any old lady, that's the tribe's queen you can tell by all of the jewellery on her" I said to my sister. " HELLO," a loud voice said "Who's there?" Harriet said. It was the old lady! "AAAAAAAHHHHHHH" Harriet screamed again "Give me the map or you'll be dead meat by tonight," the grotesque, shrivelled old lady screeched. " Don't give her the map Jim!" my sister shouted at me. "But I don't want you to go Harriet!" I cried. "The lady clapped her hands and out of nowhere, a bunch of people came and took Harriet away. "Come back, don't leave me here!" I screamed at Harriet. "GO!" Harriet demanded, and she was gone.

Rune Island

Author:Fred

Hello,if you want to go on Rune Island...please don't go.Its an absolute nightmare.Trees were huddled up together deadly eyes were staring at us.Im just warning you please don't go

The crew raised the anchor down."Be careful crew.I know that i'm not your captain but we should be aware of things on the island," told Jim.

Impulsively Stephen rushed the dark,raven jaguars rolled and knocked one out cold with a bow.Stephen quoted,"Form up on me!" the crew walked to him.They surrounded the jet-black jaguar.Without any choice, they decided to cook them because they were very hungry.In Jim's head, he didn't think that making a campfire was a good idea since the fire would alert pirates."We should stop the campfire.It alerts other pirates.The group agreed even though he wasn't captain.The crew made a soft bed and fell asleep.Unforseenly,a crew hyjacked Jim in his sleep.

Amazingly,the crew agreed.They crept soundlessly.Whilst listening, they heared snoring.Who will know what that could be?

One of the crew saw fur.He shouted "JAGUARS!" he was right but they woke up.They had 12 inch long,razor teeth!Their moths were open wide ready to fight.

I walked into a bush, without a second to think, I realised that myself , the captain and the rest of the crew were in a cage and that there was absolutely no way out! "Look at what you have done now!" screeched purple-beard. Some other pirates appeared. We were all confused. There was no treasure! It was a trap all along and this was going to be the last day of my life. I was right all along,something was going to happen-something bad.

I didn't know what to do so I decided to wait and see what happened... and it worked!!! I thought of victory, I thought of anything happy I ever could have. However this could go horribly wrong, yet I didn't dare think of that. My crew and the other pirates were going to go underwater and get a fish. If we won then they would set us free and if they won, we would be their slaves.There was no doubt that would (definitely) win though. So it was going to start. Bill was going to go from our crew ,he was the best swimmer out of all of us, and another guy from the other crew. It was like doing everything all over again-but worse.

Is it too late to go back? Why does this look like a nightmare? Do I have to get off the ship? All of these questions kept bursting out of me as I put my first foot on the wet sand. I got off the ship onto the beach, which was no longer sand and now mud. The sight of the island gave me qualms. There were rocks -that looked as if they were pedestals- and all different sorts of pine trees, however, their colour was a uniform grey.

I felt my body quiver, I just knew that we didn't belong here, or that something was going to happen; however, I ignored that and trotted along the Trail. "Is it only me or can you smell fire?" I bellowed to Captain Purple-Beard. "Yes it's quite strong actually," he replied. I kept thinking that there was something in the bushes yet as soon as I turned around, there was nothing there.

I just was on the beach then I find the map it was in a hole .I think someone left it ? Do l pick it up or not? Then I pick it up . Then something come up it was so far that I could not see real far .Then it a pirate ship wait they not going to kidnap me . Do l run or stay ? But the pirate ship come to me said " Hey do you have the map? I replied " ummm y~yes but why if you need it?"

Nervously, I was slowly going to the sea but the crew and the captin said ,"Go away or we going to hit you " But I stepped away and I tolled them some question because they look like pirates  and  they have  ship . I replied, "C-can I say some question ?"  The crew said ," ummm I think yes but not silly okay  I replied , " O-okay " I said , I need to think  about the question "

Have you ever felt terrified and exited at the same time? Well I did when I first stepped on treasure island.

Have you ever felt terrified and exited at the same time? Well I did, when I first stepped on treasure island. When I was in the Hispaniola, Captain Blue Beard was fuming because it was all grey and dull and he had a frustrated attitude (I am board of it as well). "Why does it have to be dull and grey? " Captain Blue Beard shouted storming of to the galley.

I felt a funny feeling on my hand. "Aaaaaaaaaaah what is this, did you do it crew?" I questioned. I heard a scary loud roar, a hiss, a hard chomp and terrifying moving bush. I got the captain's torch and threw it at the bush but it started spitting flames of fire. Obviously the hiss was a snake but I'm not sure what the chomp was or the roar.

The first step on the Island astonished me.The attractive but heartbreaking scent, would slyly come even though no fear was in the human. As I reached into my back pack a colossal booby trap set off.My heart pounded with shock"ooh ooh aah aah!"the monkey ferociously complained and jumped out like it was at the war.I always knew monkeys were intelligent"lets all follow him,." the captain joyfully said.As quick as a flash the monkey led us to the majestic treasure.

The crew betrayed us and a person was approaching.I had a immense,ferocious light bulb flick in the files of mine."where are you going!" curiously i said to the crews.The crew,who were mad, were ferocious.Suddenly they grabbed the treasure of we go then.As we were so keen to know where the treasure was.The crew-who were in the distance-where starting to slow down.As they had no hope we caught up to them.A monumental feeling came to me as we ran with the treasure with no clue what was inside...

"Yes finally,"said the crew happily."Shut it now or i'll make you do it,''shouted the captain A.K.A captain Hook." fine,''said the whole crew very, very suspiciously." Yes don't you think this is super, super excitingly?," questioned Jim.While Jim and Benjamin was walking.They suddenly, tripped over a very,very Large rock and tumbled down to a gigantic whole.Suddenly, the corridors started echoing for a while then. . . Silence. . . However, Jim and Benjamin tip toed through the corridors trying to investigate who is making the echoes. Suddenly, Jim stopped for a while. " Jim are you fine? O M G," Benjamin asked then shouted."Oh no it's the Death Raid Pirates,'' looking scared. The pirates' wooden legs crept towards Jim. Jim was freaking out and also Jim was feeling terrified and worried about what will the Death Raid Pirates will do to him.

Jim turned round and ran past the corridors and through the whole place to find an exit then suddenly, . . . splash!.. . . . the Death Raid Pirates fell in the crockidile sea. " oh no please help we won't capture you guys just please help  us,'' the Death Raid Pirates being dramatic. 

After I was thinking we shall teach the bad pirates . So a talk to the crews that we can teach them to be good pirate . Then so I shouted them to come my ship to teach to be good pirates not bad pirates . So I was so tried about teaching to be good pirates . But I have a plan hears the plan so we going to work together and share the treasure and be freinds . So we swap the treasure but you go to your ship you will fall low us. So went to find the treasure but the tricks us.

We didn't win I can't even explain what happened. All that I can say is that Bill has passed away, I'm a slave, and this how i'm going to exist for the next 60 miserable years of my disastrous life...

Have you ever been on a boat?It once started when we had this gargantuan, ancient map.when i first step lingeringly of the boat I could see the minute glow in the distance"where are we exactly?"I sighed. "Do you have a retentive memory." the crew said which had malicious attitudes.Obviously, they would have ventured the whole Island(even though they had antique,wooden legs)I had a variety of attempts to locate where my treasure lead"Imagine it was the crew's treasure,"I moaned.

I had a microscopic amount of worries,even though you would predict searching the island was good.The horizon smelt fishy and something was wrong."Did anyone find it yet."I shouted.grudgingly,100% definitely someone was spying on us. "Look at all that debris."I curiously said.The bushes were rattling, the sand was swooshing...

A few hours later the captain said to me "Your little arms have worked hard enough. Oh, I have a good idea, why don't you go exploring with your sister Harriet" the captain said to me. That's right I have a sister, BUT she's not like any other sister, Harriet's better than that. Shes so, so cool. "OK captain" I said. "Be back for tea though and don't loose each other," he shouted over the pile of logs he had chopped down.

We walked into the forest of pine trees "Hurry up, we don't have all day and we have to be back for tea!" my sister said to me anxiously. As we walked along I had a feeling we were being watched, "Come on!" my sister whispered to me again. I felt a cold, sharp shiver up my spine. This was when I started to get worried.

" How are we going to get it ? "I said loudly . " You will see , replied Captain Peg Leg . Only for a space of a minute I turned a round and then BANG ! He was in the river ... He swam and swam for the treasure very fast . The treasure chest - which is huge - had millions of gold in it . He caught it .He swam frantically to get to shore . CHOMP !!! His legs were gone . He was to far away for me to help him . " Let go of the treasure ! " I yelled . " come on crow we have to go , " I called . B-but captain , " moaned Bob . " I am captain so call me captain JIM ! " I replied .

They quickly ran to the Hispaniola (the boat).So i spread all the gold and silver out.There was about 5000 gold and 5000 silver coins.We shared it out so we had 2000 coins each. Then we enjoyed the nice calm peaceful ride home.

had a heart attack!"Ashley, Kim ,Sally come and meet your new friend, Luna!" she screamed. I was in shock when I saw them because they looked exactly the same. They were twins! [That is obvious]. The following hours were dreading on and on. This day was never ending but finally lunch had came and I was starving because I didn't have breakfast.After I finished my lunch-which only took me about 2 minutes- I actually started to look for the treasure intensely. The map said it was somewhere on the edge of the shore or maybe even in the water. Where could it be? After a while, I heard a ship approaching. It had an abundant amount of people. I didn't know what to do, but only get the captain. It was a very stressful time. My heart was pounding out of my chest. As I turned around, I saw a glimpse of gold in the water. I turned around again to check if I wasn't

"Listen up, the cave - which is right there - is very close to the x , so lets take a look inside ," Captain said. Then, as soon as we were about to go into the cave, Billy said "Wait there was a foot there was a foot so that means there is people ," "Billy we're probably hallucinating from that old fish ," I said whilst looking a bit sick from that old rotten fish . Then as soon as we were about to walk into the cave, a bunch of pirates jumped out and started attacking . They swung their sword as fast as lightning. We ran . We stormed . We attacked but they were to strong so we ran away.

The Pirates sneaked into the cave thinking that they were alone but they were not . I had gunpowder so I lit. It exploded with a deafening bang and they fell in a huge hole that Billy had dug before .They fell down the monstrous hole . We ran quickly into the gloomy cave and grabbed the treasure. We sneaked back out and looked inside the huge treasure box. There were Rubies, diamonds and many more that we couldn't even name.

The Treasure Island Trip...

"Benjamin, Ben, Melli, Ashley, Alice , Sally, Tim, Charlie, Max, Eve, Jack, Zak and Alex! Come here you lot and the captain ; I found it, I found treasure!" I screamed. "Where? Where is it? Did you actually find it!" said the crew whilst their jaw dropped."Yes, look at that golden thing in the water. Grab it!" I replied. The crew grabbed it and they said it was extremely heavy so I gave them a hand and they were right. I was relieved and astonished! I never saw anything like this before. It's a miracle!

After that, none of us could believe our eyes saw. We were all shocked what happened. Now nothing is interesting to us around. The treasure, which has a pearl necklace, pearl bracelet and a crown with gold on it and pearls, gems, gold, silver and crystals, was so interesting but I don't know why. This was mermaid jewelry and the pearls are the main part of it. The next morning, I woke up and just saw fog. It was so thick I could barley see anything. The fog was very opaque. In addition to, this was my worst night ever because there was a little tide and it was ice cold when it touched me." Good morning captain. Is the treasure ok?" I asked worridily "Yes, it was my pillow and although it was really uncomftable, I had to keep it secure so non of those naughty crew stole it and swam away to Cornwall and left you and my little daughters here with me in charge."replied the captain.[Dear reader, so you would Cornwall is our home town].

Would you ever risk you life to get the greatest treasure ever? we got off the boot on to the quick sand. Up a head there was a crooked forest . There was trees that where uniform. We walked for 5 minutes and 9 second. there was a shape. In the distance, the clouds covered the shape so we ignored it. We carried on going and followed it through the cooked forest.

The pirates jumped of the boot .And are captain said to to me. " Go and play tricks on them''. I said " no because I only on you'' .Are captain said " but you need to fore are treasure .So I run up a tree.

After I run up a tree .I shake a bush, put branch in there face. And made bare noises .They run onto there boot. And sailed of sum of them jumped off the boot. Because they was that scared .

In the distance, there is a sheep coming through the clothes. The sheep came in very quick. From the horizon. It came as quick as a flash it got her. The captain said" that treasure is ares''.

I hop they stay a way from us. suddenly I tripped off over a piece of rope. I heard a big rock it was coming for us. Run for I lives we jumped onto the boot and sailed off. Be hand us the big rock splashed into the water it got us socked.

Have you been to Treasure Island before ? .  We all got off the boat me , the captain and the crow  . I didn't like the look of the island . It was dreary . I opened the map up . " Give me that map I think I know the way ! " yelled the Captain Peg Leg . So Captain which way should we go to look for the treasure ?

"Lets get started ! " I screeched . Me and the Captain set of and all the other crow stay behind to watch the boat . The jungle is actually a bit prettier on the other side of the island . The map showed the X mark the spot on the left hand side of the island but it show it was on a stump in the river . " Captain come quick ! " I called . " What is it ! " yelled Captain Peg Leg . " I found the treasure ... but it's in the river ! " I replied . " What ! " yelled Captain Peg Leg .

''Aahhh,''shouted the captain.''Aww can't you swim ,''said the crew while they where laughing.Swim ,''questioned the captain weirdly 

'' I can't believe i'm really leaving to go to treasure island,''speaking while he was sobbing alone.Jim quickly packed his bag and walked down the corridors. Suddenly, Jim bobbed into Benjamin ''oh sorry Benjamin,'' Jim said to him. '' Jim where are you going,''Benjamin replied to him.,''oh haven't you heard i'm going to treasure island anyway bye i need to get on a move on because i'm running late,'' Jim said back to Benjamin.,''can i please come with you,'' Benjamin trying to convince Jim with the puppy eyes,'' Benjamin trying to convince Jim to come with him.''well fine,'' Jim finally said yes to Benjamin.While Jim and Benjamin where walking up the wooden step of the aisle was shaky and wobbly then suddenly, . . . splash! . . . Jim and Benjamin fell in the cold ice water."O M G this is so cold ,''shouting and screaming Jim and Benjamin."what happened here,''questioned the whole crew."no time for explaining can you please just get us out were already running late,'' said Jim shivering cold in ice.''oh right away,''said the whole crew while rushing through everything.'' why are they taking so long,'' questioned Benjamin while shivering by the cold ice sea.,''right were here clime on this so you can go to treasure island right away so you can't be late."oh thank goodness you'r here I was getting worried that me and Benjamin will be in here for ages even more then years or months but surly not weeks,'' Jim was talking while getting up in the ladder.

After a while, we went on the ship, we were in the Hispaniola, for about 2 hours. Me and the crew couldn't handle looking at the treasure chest then I asked the captain that if I could open the treasure chest and he said that I could. I opened the treasure chest then... It turned out that they were sticks. "How are these treasures sticks. after all we've been through these terrifying adventures, nearly eaten by a crocodile, a lion and nearly swallowed by a snake!" I said in madness and I couldn't believe what I had seen.

Suddenly, I had an idea.I took out some flammable oil.I poured it on the ground near the door and put some wood from the immense rotten log and started to make a fire.Unexpectedly,I cut my hand of.Blood was squirting out.My veins dangled out.Screaming, I quickly grabbed a rotten leave and covered my hand.A tiny spark appeared so I put it on the oil and it made a tiny explosion that thankfully scared them off.Slowly I entered...

Glowing lights brightly shon.I used yet again a rotten leave to cover the glow.I couldn't believe my eyes.It was the treasure.As I went out,I stopped halfway through the door.I heard swords clanging.My crew had been fighting the pirates!I rushed out shouting,"Thank goodness your here!" "Were happy to help!"said the crew.I rushed out then I felt tugging on my leg so I gave it a push .... my leg came off!I screamed,"Awwooo!"the crew helped me and fitted on a wooden leg.We dashed back out to the boat not forgetting the treasure.The captain gasped in shock at my leg but was exited.We had found the treasure!So we sailed off hoping the storms wouldn't brew.We each got hold of the beloved treasure.Then Jack (one of the crew members) took the treasure and jumped into the water.He went back on the island. Out came a pirate's leg.He was a traitor!He shouted,"Amateur!Haha!"All we knew was that we would never encounter an island like that or even the island it's self.

Ha ray were going to get this treasure because its ''just over this next cliff'' lets have a look at the view. OMG there's a rainbow telling us were to go. ''wait look people are getting are treasure .'' ''o no ''the captain said ''give me our treasure Now No said the other captain loudly. suddenly, I said ''A TACK'' we took out our sords and chopped the captain's arm of ''Give me the treasure or it will be your head next'' the captain said give  them the treasure there not worth it ''yay '' ''we have got it we've got the treasure were so happy.

We were about to get on the ship. suddently ) hand us the treasuere on the opasit side we ran with the treasure in our hands they grabed the treasure of us and we ran ran after them. And then we got it back I said next time we selabrate ''make sure we are on the ship first ''we got on the ship and selabrated what do you think will happen next?

Do you ever want to visit Treasure Island? Well read this extract and then we will see if you want to go. Me ( Jim) and the captain are trying to work out how to use the map (it seems really complicated). In my stomach i have a feeling of qualm because i was having second thoughts about getting onto Treasure Island.There was lots of vegetation and the island was sweltering.Definitely you could say Treasure Island was massive but it looked scary.The Captain's map,which had a lot of paths on it,had an x marks the spot. "YAY there is an x marks the spot !" I screamed. "SILENCE !!"The captain shouted back. The island was dreary because all there was sand,vegetation,logs and spyglass rocks (a rock that looks like a pedestal because of it's sheer sides).

"Alright lets get a move on !"The captain shouted to everyone on the island that was part of his crew.then all of a sudden we heard a rustling in the bushes like someone was running,they were running so high-speed it was basically the flash.Also there was the smell of smoke and there were a lot of tribes so it might be from them.Possibly we could die because there are so many Bullet ants and Tse Tse flies so we had to be really careful.Suddenly,we heard someone creeping up behind us ...........

When my crew and I first stepped onto Terror Island, my dream finally came true . It was the first step to being the greatest pirate of the seven seas . I have been on this boat for months . Even though it was dreary , it was still the greatest day of my life. In the distance, the monstrous mountain had roughly carved letters spelling the words 'Terror Island' on it.

I felt an emotion somewhere between excitement and nerves. Captain Red Beard - my boss- told us to try and locate where the treasure might be. "Aye , aye my crew, look right here ,we're not far from the treasure !" Captain said whilst pointing to the upper left corner of the map. "Certainly, we're not far , Billy get your lucky spade out ," I said. We got Billy's lucky spade out and began to search.

We started to search for the treasure . We looked everywhere . The treasure was no-where to be found . We looked on the map. We were lost until , I heard a rucked voice say "Move over ," " Guys d- did y-you guys h-h-ear that ?" I said " Umm no why i didn't hear anything!" I just ignored it because they thought I was exaggerating I swear i heard it though. Then we all got a rank waft of sweat. " Ewwwww!" we all shouted. " Shh be quiet there could be anything on this island," I said in a whispered tone. We started creeping, crouching towards the smell of sweat . Then we saw a quick glimpse of a disgusting old foot . " Ahhhhhhh!"

We quickly grabbed the treasure and ran away but I accidentally jumped and landed safely in the water. My captain and crew were still on the tiny pedestal stump and I had to wait for them. We quickly rowed over back to shore so that we could give everyone the treasure. Everyone got 25% of the treasure because there was only 4 crew members including me and my dad. The story didn't end there. We spent the money on a brand new boat and set off to sea looking for new adventures. But I'll tell you about that another time...

''Hey,come back here you boy !'' yelled the captain at me. ''Sorry captain; I have to find a sleeping spot for tonight.'' I answered. ''That boy is cheeky,clumsy,clever and many more.'' I over heard the captain say about me. Meanwhile that happened, I found a spot to sleep in, so I settled in and went for a quick nap. The quick nap turned into 4 hour sleep until 7 o'clock! Everyone was angry at me and I was worried about I thought the captain would do something to me.''Right Luna, time for you, go to sleep.''said the captain,who was tired,with boredom. ''But...'' ''It's an order! You have to do it!"shouted the captain.I had enough of this from then."Can I at least be sitting in my spot,please?" "Yes, but Benjamin will take you there." replied the captain.I had to say yes or it would surely be the end of my journey.The captain was strict so anyway I would have to say yes.

At about midnight, I fell asleep for a solid 4 minutes until a scream woke me up. The scream was a white tiger's roar and at the same time a soft whisper. It was near the island's shore and maybe even on the other island next to us and also it sounded like someone was stranded by a vicious snake. I was sweltering as it was getting louder and closer. The next morning, I have been frightened to walk away from my spot first, so I had to stay a little longer. After a few minutes, I heard foot steps getting closer but I knew who that was, it was Alice. She had hazelnut eyes, ginger hair and a couple of freckles under both of her eyes.Alice is the captain's daughter. She had to go because her mum has died a couple of months ago."Hello. Did I wake you up?"asked Alice. "No,i'm awake from a couple of minutes.Did you here the scream last night?" Oh yes, they were really loud weren't they."she replied.I might have been dreaming because she sounded like she was lying."I-I will ask my sisters if they heard it."said Alice as she began to sweat and stress from lying. After that, Alice went for her sisters and she screamed so loudly she woke up the crew, the captain and I nearly

I stepped into treasure Island slowly, i could now hear different noises of animals and see different shapes of trees.The wind blows through them. I picked a handful of sand then the wind takes it from my hand.

Hhh jim " cofit this tracher is soo dosty."

Jim asked the doctor "why are the trees shaking so widely?

Afkors said the docter this is an old tracher lats stop tocing and open the Treasure ok said the dokter eeeeee the tracher scweecd . Another MAP...

I coutd her some anemels . I coutd see the leves fouling from the trees. A monkey touk the map cwicly and ran away and gave it to capten red eye.

Jim foind the monkey but there was another captain who called captain red eye. The doctor had a rope who throws it towards the monkey. The monkey screams we took the key from the monkey and set off to find the treasure we walked through the heart Island I saw the sun shining on the treasure now I just need to put the key in the treasure.

First of all I got of this rickaty ship and felt the sand between my toe's.I was also felling a bit sea sick so I had a drink of juice. Then I was fine sitting on the beach having a rest. The other's were looking around the island with out a map.

Then I said '' get the map and were''ll try to find the treasure before someone comes to this island and beets us to it.''Suddenly,I fell into a boo be trap.I then know someone was on this Island with us! I quickly gathered the crew and told them ''we need to find the treasure quick or were 'll never get this treasure ''what do you mean ''there's boo traps all over that mean's people are on this island with us.''your write quick get looking ...

He was clearly scared,He sprinted into the dark foggy distance..I only saw his leg, He has stepped into the fog,.His heart was racing as fast as lightning STRIKES!!

He came back with an Immense Elephant,The mysterious tribe Ran off into the distance,The elephant sprayed the fire and saved the captain, he woke up last second..His heart Raced '' AHH!!'' he screamed shockingly.The elephant picked the captain up and put him down -Carefully-.Then the elephant brought Treasure Box By digging down.Everyone was cheering! but,.. no-one has the key to open it... ''What do we do now..?''.I Slowly asked All of a sudden a shadow came sprinting around the woods around me...I stepped back and fell inside a deep dark hole..I screamed for help.But no-one could hear me,..Slowly i wondered around, something caught my eye..It was bright.I walked towards it,My heart was beating faster than light.I picked it up and tucked it in my pocket.I slowly walked up the entrance.. I remembered i had a dagger for emergencies only.I started sticking it onto the wall. I was rock climbing.I reached the top.I was exchausted.I couldn't even move.I slowly took out the shining object.I looked and was shocked -because it was the Treasure key-.I opened the Treasure box... THERE WAS GOLD! AND CRYSTALS.I gave some to the crew ''AHOI!!'' everyone cheered

If you ever get a free trip to Treasure Island, please don't go! I was sitting down as my captain-who felt dreary- was staring at me the whole time and I was feeling uneasy. ''Jim, pass me THE MAP!!" my captain exclaimed to me. (fun fact he's my dad.) I did feel a little bit of a tingling sensation coming up my spine because he gave me a hug a said 'Thank you'. When he got to the island my crew, some who are friends, cheered and shouted 'Hooray!'

We had been communicating for 5 minutes straight in this filthy island. I ran through the shattered glass on the sand and towards Spy Glass and tried to climbed the sheer, arduous rock but my captain caught me - he is really kind to me but not the crew- and he said, "Jim, where on earth do you think you are going son?'' I went silent for longer than a minute which meant that he knew I was nervous to talk.

Me and my crew-including my captain- stepped onto the island and in the corner of my eye, I desperately saw a lime bush in the mountains above. There was a really mountainous rock towering over us. ''Jim, that is a mountain called the Spy Glass. There is rarely any treasure up there boy.'' I felt a paper cut on my foot so I looked at my bleeding heel and saw a treasure map that must have been about 1000 years old. Then I realised that the lime bush might be a clue.

''I-I-I want-ed-d to go to the maze on the Spy Glass.'' I said panic-stricken. My dad turned his frown upside down so it would make me feel more happy. " I want you to remember me if I get trapped by the upcoming people." he whispered. My crew were running over to us and we all tried to get up the Spy Glass.

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