Oliver the Twisted Orphan

By George

On that soggy night, Oliver was going crazy because he didn't know if he should escape or stay with the risk of being hung. BANG! Mr Bumble bust in and to his surprise . Oliver was gone vanished in thin air Mr Bumble did not know that Oliver had actually hidden inside the covers of Mr bumble was horrified so I sent out a search party to look for him.

Later that evening, Mr bumble sent out a search party. Oliver was running as fast as he could to the train station but boom a tugging train comes passing by. Oliver was horrified because that was a train to London. Oliver is going crazy but he new he couldn't waste anything because he has an old tractor front of him. Oliver saw a sign saying thirty miles south east to London.

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Oliver started to get very dizzy very dizzy his thirst was getting worst, But he knew he had to go on.Ten miles to go he mumbled to himself.Oliver saw two shadowy figures coming down the road boom! He face planted it was dark very dark. He couldn't feel anything nothing at all.

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As Oliver woke up, he saw two ugly men but there was one man who stood out. He injured he introduced himself "I am the most famous pickpocket in the world" he said
"I am Fagin and you are"
"I am Oliver I am an orphan" He mumbled
"Ah I see"
"These are my people MY GANG" he shouted
"You boy should join my gang if not you will die" he shout again
"Okay okay condition you give me half of the money that you make" he smirked
"HALF NEVER" He shouted
"Okay well how about twenty five percent" He smiled
"Okay if you just put your DEAD BOY"

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Three weeks later, as Oliver woke up on a hard solid bed, Fagin started screaming to the top of his lungs "it's the police the police are here" he screamed BANG! To go shops went off. Oliver had two men shouting and shouting "Hands up boys are going to jail for a long time" Fagin and made a massive mistake and attack the police officer BANG! Fagin was dead the office has been stabbed and collapse in front of Oliver. Oliver scared so he ran off never to be seen again.

THE END

After Oliver's mother had died when he was born.Oliver was very lonely and had to work twenty four seven.With infections and cuts. Oliver was very skinny and hardly got fed.Oliver had no friends but only faith.

This book is great for kids because it's based on victorians and action packed with great amazements.